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my leg has sprung a leak my leg has sprung a leak
- 
"I need jiegermeister" "I need jiegermeister"
- 
yahoos yell mohawk yahoos yell mohawk
- 
and cripples navigate wood and cripples navigate wood
- 
blocks blocks
- 
kevin's cubist vision kevin's cubist vision
- 
cites a beard cites a beard
- 
bulging loin is shaven bulging loin is shaven
- 
she is weeping floss she is weeping floss
- 
a string from her eye is red a string from her eye is red
and yields a bringing shot and yields a bringing shot
- 
frued slipping on a tongue a baby's rattle frued slipping on a tongue a baby's rattle
- 
a toy-blot manifesto a toy-blot manifesto
- 
serious pay for my half serious pay for my half
- 
- 
I got it I got it I got it I got it
- 
I got what I got what
- 
- 
kick start action kick start action
- 
wires on the street can you give me wires on the street can you give me
- 
get away from his drink get away from his drink
- 
electrocuted electrocuted
- 
my biggest one of my my biggest one of my
- 
VCR's humming blown breezes VCR's humming blown breezes
- 
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laugh out the throat of warm water laugh out the throat of warm water
- 
a nondescript ass scratch a nondescript ass scratch
- 
he's like five hundred bucks he's like five hundred bucks
- 
maybe 50 maybe 50
- 
bubbles burst a stomach of fourse ---(amy joe you little bitch) bubbles burst a stomach of fourse ---(amy joe you little bitch)
- 
she is offering you she is offering you
- 
carved tattoos of an empty wallet carved tattoos of an empty wallet
- 
a man picks water for a shirt a man picks water for a shirt
- 
destroys mimesis by wit destroys mimesis by wit
- 
of a mouth probing innards of a mouth probing innards
- 
I read lips, too I read lips, too
- 
must listen I still have a sense must listen I still have a sense
- 
of smell of wishbones turkeywings of smell of wishbones turkeywings
- 
in shaping looks in shaping looks
- 
where is the knife where is the knife
- 
where is the slutwhore gentry where is the slutwhore gentry
- 
I am ablazin I am ablazin
- 
copious copious
- 
bad something you know me bad something you know me
- 
crap out a person stilted crap out a person stilted
- 
trees of a sky a dumb groping trees of a sky a dumb groping
- 
I want it to state fair ladies I want it to state fair ladies
- 
have attention have attention
- 
gentle man the ball man gentle man the ball man
- 
raise 500 fingers to air raise 500 fingers to air
- 
one young man runs a wallow in a mush pot one young man runs a wallow in a mush pot
- 
all day all day
- 
- 
ok all right ok all right
- 
two poeple go ahead for pleasure two poeple go ahead for pleasure
- 
disabled bodies disabled bodies
- 
a category a category
- 
flirting reckless nymph chats flirting reckless nymph chats
- 
you are responsible you are responsible
- 
a pizza in winter a pizza in winter
- 
sign your name in the able sign your name in the able
- 
bodies category bodies category
- 
any crumbling shacks slope any crumbling shacks slope
- 
with anger with fury beer with anger with fury beer
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and more and more
- 
fury sign up line up sigh up fury sign up line up sigh up
- 
die die
- 
cast cast
- 
in out of her in out of her
- 
uterus plums her uterus boston uterus plums her uterus boston
- 
dumping tea on dumping tea on
- 
the british what the british what
- 
just the british just the british
- 
are you ready no. 1 are you ready no. 1
- 
duck for a buck duck for a buck
- 
Co.! Co.!
- 
heavy seeds are weighting the grown heavy seeds are weighting the grown
- 
have attention getup have attention getup
- 
meat hooks claw flesh meat hooks claw flesh
- 
the recipient of science the recipient of science
- 
and industry claims a mottled and industry claims a mottled
- 
strapped shitted calls to him strapped shitted calls to him
- 
no that's a moray of movement no that's a moray of movement
- 
read the weeds of handicap navigation read the weeds of handicap navigation
- 
city blocks a jewelery cleaner city blocks a jewelery cleaner
- 
64 is my number of better go 64 is my number of better go
- 
slumming in motion is second slumming in motion is second
- 
that is the base of choice that is the base of choice
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ok more later, have to go work, tim ok more later, have to go work, tim
 +
that's it thank alot of toes that's it thank alot of toes
- 
friendly dogs for a buck friendly dogs for a buck
- 
holder no.7 spits out urine holder no.7 spits out urine
- 
I am standing in I am standing in
- 
winter clothes clad my soul winter clothes clad my soul
- 
I'd like a check of reason I'd like a check of reason
- 
leave-the-table-phase leave-the-table-phase
- 
with spoons flinging towards with spoons flinging towards
- 
the hungry the hungry
- 
brocoli-food squids that swim brocoli-food squids that swim
- 
radished burn in winter radished burn in winter
- 
is better is better
taken care of taken care of
- 
I am informed I am informed
- 
signed up signed up
- 
the first people under the chair the first people under the chair
- 
hold out arms hold out arms
- 
in rage in rage
- 
squash my enemies by speaking out squash my enemies by speaking out
- 
hyperbole waiting for what are you hyperbole waiting for what are you
- 
now not nervous now not nervous
- 
a fig a fig
- 
a log a log
- 
and a watermelon and a watermelon
- 
sink by wagers into the the thrust sink by wagers into the the thrust
- 
pulse of an artery rapture pulse of an artery rapture
- 
burst into jigsaws burst into jigsaws
- 
into a vacuum into a vacuum
- 
clean clean
- 
outside of her glasses outside of her glasses
- 
she spies daylight she spies daylight
- 
that rich wonder that rich wonder
- 
pondering drops all thought pondering drops all thought
- 
an animal in shorts an animal in shorts
- 
prattles a feezy to show prattles a feezy to show
- 
everybody everybody
- 
pay attention pay attention
- 
do not worry about falling do not worry about falling
- 
go up over go up over
- 
take a sleight left take a sleight left
- 
remove your hand remove your hand
- 
from my face from my face
- 
priest priest
- 
and and
- 
insink your belly insink your belly
- 
holy water you can find in stores holy water you can find in stores
- 
buy her some food buy her some food
- 
by a woman by a woman
- 
choose choose
- 
vieny crumbles brown and heave vieny crumbles brown and heave
- 
women nigger women nigger
- 
women mother inculpates women mother inculpates
- 
sinks and hams cooked by sinks and hams cooked by
- 
mexican sweat mexican sweat
- 
makin a move makin a move
- 
hang in the bar a figure 8 hang in the bar a figure 8
- 
a poke a poke
- 
he's doing good he's doing good
c'mon c'mon
Let me get a pitcher Let me get a pitcher
- 
and we will begin one and we will begin one
- 
of fur fire of fur fire
- 
hats a beginner hats a beginner
- 
in florida joshua is bad in florida joshua is bad
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but elijah is buddy all in there but elijah is buddy all in there
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man man
- 
who is a sugarbear who is a sugarbear
- 
see past the hand give kids a hand see past the hand give kids a hand
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ablebodied tan first up none other ablebodied tan first up none other
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a head shaven a head shaven
- 
actually they do actually they do
- 
you know the rules seen the course retire you know the rules seen the course retire
- 
the no no the no no
- 
no no no no no no
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ok a race is slaughter ok a race is slaughter
- 
a last minute a last minute
i left a quarter on the toilet i left a quarter on the toilet
- 
i roped trouble i roped trouble
- 
(boy we will catch you ok) (boy we will catch you ok)
- 
ok I guess so ready set go ok I guess so ready set go
- 
wheelies out of the gate rattling wheelies out of the gate rattling
- 
get behind here in fact get behind here in fact
- 
we're whipping the can-do-it-problem we're whipping the can-do-it-problem
- 
WHOOOO! WHOOOO!
- 
1.4 secs. 1.4 secs.
- 
more pukin' hey more pukin' hey
- 
that's a leaving hell of handing it out that's a leaving hell of handing it out
- 
who is next? who is next?
- 
squirm a beer ear who is up? squirm a beer ear who is up?
- 
dean of helmets dean of helmets
- 
dicks not here many know a 2.00$ meal ticket dicks not here many know a 2.00$ meal ticket
- 
ok as many you ok as many you
- 
may have seen may have seen
- 
stuntmen stuntmen
- 
1st time lady races 1st time lady races
- 
without a word lopped without a word lopped
- 
in a head ready to go in a head ready to go
- 
ok ok
- 
1-2-3-go 1-2-3-go
- 
crystal's sculpture of glass crystal's sculpture of glass
- 
need is going for it need is going for it
- 
checking her hair is picking flies checking her hair is picking flies
- 
the momma of matchboxes the momma of matchboxes
- 
has an 18-wheel gurney has an 18-wheel gurney
- 
this is why this is why
- 
he lost his soul in the river he lost his soul in the river
- 
arms chump stomach arms chump stomach
- 
wretchedness of vomit wretchedness of vomit
- 
ok a guy is next he ok a guy is next he
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was a big man in town was a big man in town
- 
until tearing women onetwothree until tearing women onetwothree
- 
off his flung sweat a head off his flung sweat a head
- 
- 
of excruciating of excruciating
- 
what she will what she will
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that makes my bladder that makes my bladder
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chariots bust up chariots bust up
- 
broken houses already to pour cement broken houses already to pour cement
- 
in holes in holes
- 
by the water of a skewed by the water of a skewed
- 
enviro-ment attempt to beat enviro-ment attempt to beat
- 
a sling of arrows pierce the door a sling of arrows pierce the door
- 
hands slop up wetslick hands slop up wetslick
- 
vaginal game-so-of-it vaginal game-so-of-it
- 
look at it one wheel rollin' look at it one wheel rollin'
- 
ok he's ok ok he's ok
- 
he's grumbling out glory he's grumbling out glory
- 
computer plugs driven by amphetamine mice computer plugs driven by amphetamine mice
- 
drill out wholes drill out wholes
- 
in her body wrapped red wrappted with rapture in her body wrapped red wrappted with rapture
- 
so what so what
- 
her ankle murmurs passions unknown her ankle murmurs passions unknown
- 
to lost letters to lost letters
- 
and and
- 
filled filled
- 
tubes lunch on shells tubes lunch on shells
- 
second place second place
- 
arrives arrives
- 
wearing amped up power chords wearing amped up power chords
- 
- 
attached to a groin attached to a groin
- 
delayed spring delayed spring
- 
a bed lost in space a bed lost in space
- 
that's a tree that's a tree
- 
and fuck and fuck
- 
and waits but wait! and waits but wait!
- 
three rocks dump your head three rocks dump your head
- 
wallow grovel street at night thinking vacuums wallow grovel street at night thinking vacuums
- 
spots and a blistered thight begs a broken hand spots and a blistered thight begs a broken hand
- 
we have cruel stuff we have cruel stuff
- 
we have no knowledge of what we do we have no knowledge of what we do
- 
no knowledge no knowledge
- 
like that space-meeting-smitty like that space-meeting-smitty
- 
he hangs like-understand-a-lot he hangs like-understand-a-lot
- 
a week of orlando a week of orlando
- 
streets bump into someone else streets bump into someone else
- 
for why make speaking for myself for why make speaking for myself
- 
living here mentioned or else living here mentioned or else
- 
bearded vitupe make closure bearded vitupe make closure
- 
hiding hiding
- 
paranoia is not sure paranoia is not sure
- 
just say your deal scared knuckle visits just say your deal scared knuckle visits
springfield is not actual springfield is not actual
- 
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only after all is done only after all is done
- 
anamorphic victims a verbal foot anamorphic victims a verbal foot
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done now transmitted to a child's brain done now transmitted to a child's brain
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shooting bull is it good shooting bull is it good
 +</pre>
 +
 +== Critical Appraisal ==
 +
 +----
 +"Reads like a bunch of drunks wrote it --which as it turns out, it was." Elbert Knowles,; editor, [[The Caged Alaskan.]]

Revision as of 06:41, 6 Aug 2004

Sporadically related to P-Boy and Tim Wilson through the medium of strong spirits, Bending Denim displays a playful mangling of words, or, as Steven Adkins described it, "the poetry of dangling legs."

BENDING DENIM 

BENDING DENIM

my leg has sprung a leak
"I need jiegermeister"
yahoos yell mohawk
and cripples navigate wood
blocks

kevin's cubist vision
cites a beard
bulging loin is shaven
she is weeping floss
a string from her eye is red

and yields a bringing shot
frued slipping on a tongue a baby's rattle
a toy-blot manifesto
serious pay for my half

I got it I got it
I got what

kick start action
wires on the street can you give me
get away from his drink
electrocuted
my biggest one of my
VCR's humming blown breezes

laugh out the throat of warm water
a nondescript ass scratch
he's like five hundred bucks
maybe 50
bubbles burst a stomach of fourse ---(amy joe you little bitch)

she is offering you
carved tattoos of an empty wallet
	a man picks water for a shirt
	destroys mimesis by wit
	of a mouth probing innards
I read lips, too

must listen I still have a sense
of smell of wishbones turkeywings
in shaping looks
where is the knife
where is the slutwhore gentry
	I am ablazin
	copious
	bad something you know me

crap out a person stilted
trees of a sky a dumb groping
I want it to state fair ladies
	have attention
	gentle man the ball man
	raise 500 fingers to air
one young man runs a wallow in a mush pot
all day

ok all right
two poeple go ahead for pleasure
disabled bodies
a category
flirting reckless nymph chats
you are responsible
a pizza in winter

sign your name in the able
bodies category
any crumbling shacks slope
with anger with fury beer
and more
fury sign up line up sigh up
die
cast
in out of her
uterus plums her uterus boston
dumping tea on
the british what
just the british
are you ready no. 1
duck for a buck
Co.!

heavy seeds are weighting the grown
have attention getup
meat hooks claw flesh
the recipient of science
and industry claims a mottled
strapped shitted calls to him

no that's a moray of movement
read the weeds of handicap navigation
city blocks a jewelery cleaner
64 is my number of better go
slumming in motion is second
that is the base of choice



ok more later, have to go work, tim



that's it thank alot of toes
friendly dogs for a buck
holder no.7 spits out urine
I am standing in
winter clothes clad my soul
I'd like a check of reason
leave-the-table-phase
with spoons flinging  towards
the hungry
brocoli-food squids that swim
radished burn in winter 
is better

taken care of
I am informed
signed up
the first people under the chair
hold out arms
in rage
squash my enemies by speaking out
hyperbole waiting for what are you
now not nervous
a fig
a log
and a watermelon
sink by wagers into the the thrust
pulse of an artery rapture
burst into jigsaws
into a vacuum
clean
outside of her glasses
	she spies daylight

that rich wonder
pondering drops all thought

an animal in shorts
prattles a feezy to show
everybody
pay attention
do not worry about falling
go up over
take a sleight left
remove your hand
from my face
priest
and
insink your belly
holy water you can find in stores
buy her some food
by a woman
choose

vieny crumbles brown and heave
women nigger
women mother inculpates
sinks and hams cooked by
mexican sweat
makin a move
hang in the bar a figure 8
a poke
he's doing good
c'mon

Let me get a pitcher
and we will begin one
of fur fire
hats a beginner

in florida joshua is bad
	but elijah is buddy all in there
man
who is a sugarbear
see past the hand give kids a hand
ablebodied tan first up none other
	a head shaven
	actually they do
	you know the rules seen the course retire
	the no no
	no no no
ok a race is slaughter
a last minute

i left a quarter on the toilet
i roped trouble
(boy we will catch you ok)
ok I guess so ready set go
wheelies out of the gate rattling
get behind here in fact
we're whipping the can-do-it-problem

WHOOOO!

1.4 secs.

more pukin' hey
that's a leaving hell of handing it out

who is next?
squirm a beer ear who is up?
dean of helmets

dicks not here many know a 2.00$ meal ticket
ok as many you
may have seen
stuntmen
	1st time lady races
	without a word lopped
	in a head ready to go
ok
1-2-3-go
crystal's sculpture of glass
need is going for it
checking her hair is picking flies
the momma of matchboxes
has an 18-wheel gurney

this is why
he lost his soul in the river
arms chump stomach
wretchedness of vomit
ok a guy is next he
was a big man in town
until tearing women onetwothree
off his flung sweat a head
of excruciating
what she will
that makes my bladder
chariots bust up
broken houses already to pour cement
	in holes
	by the water of a skewed
		enviro-ment attempt to beat
a sling of arrows pierce the door
		hands slop up wetslick
vaginal game-so-of-it
look at it one wheel rollin'
ok he's ok
he's grumbling out glory
computer plugs driven by amphetamine mice
drill out wholes
in her body wrapped red wrappted with rapture
so what
her ankle murmurs passions unknown
to lost letters
and 
filled
tubes lunch on shells
	second place
	arrives
	wearing amped up power chords
attached to a groin
	delayed spring
	a bed lost in space
	that's a tree
		and fuck
		and waits but wait!

three rocks dump your head
wallow grovel street at night thinking vacuums
spots and a blistered thight begs a broken hand

we have cruel stuff
we have no knowledge of what we do
no knowledge
	like that space-meeting-smitty
	he hangs like-understand-a-lot
		a week of orlando
	streets bump into someone else
for why make speaking for myself
	living here mentioned or else
		bearded vitupe make closure
	hiding
	paranoia is not sure
just say your deal scared knuckle visits
	springfield is not actual
	only after all is done
anamorphic victims a verbal foot
done now transmitted to a child's brain
	shooting bull is it good

Critical Appraisal

"Reads like a bunch of drunks wrote it --which as it turns out, it was." Elbert Knowles,; editor, The Caged Alaskan.

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