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- | Sporadically related to [[P-Boy]] and [[Tim Wilson]] through the medium of strong spirits, Bending Denim displays a playful mangling of words, or, as [[Steven Adkins]] described it, "the poetry of dangling legs." | + | [[Category:Extant Works]]Sporadically related to [[P-Boy]] and [[Tim Wilson]] through the medium of strong spirits, Bending Denim displays a playful mangling of words, or, as [[Steven Adkins]] described it, "the poetry of dangling legs." |
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== BENDING DENIM == | == BENDING DENIM == | ||
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my leg has sprung a leak | my leg has sprung a leak | ||
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"I need jiegermeister" | "I need jiegermeister" | ||
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yahoos yell mohawk | yahoos yell mohawk | ||
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and cripples navigate wood | and cripples navigate wood | ||
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blocks | blocks | ||
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kevin's cubist vision | kevin's cubist vision | ||
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cites a beard | cites a beard | ||
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bulging loin is shaven | bulging loin is shaven | ||
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she is weeping floss | she is weeping floss | ||
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a string from her eye is red | a string from her eye is red | ||
and yields a bringing shot | and yields a bringing shot | ||
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frued slipping on a tongue a baby's rattle | frued slipping on a tongue a baby's rattle | ||
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a toy-blot manifesto | a toy-blot manifesto | ||
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serious pay for my half | serious pay for my half | ||
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I got it I got it | I got it I got it | ||
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I got what | I got what | ||
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kick start action | kick start action | ||
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wires on the street can you give me | wires on the street can you give me | ||
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get away from his drink | get away from his drink | ||
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electrocuted | electrocuted | ||
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my biggest one of my | my biggest one of my | ||
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VCR's humming blown breezes | VCR's humming blown breezes | ||
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laugh out the throat of warm water | laugh out the throat of warm water | ||
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a nondescript ass scratch | a nondescript ass scratch | ||
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he's like five hundred bucks | he's like five hundred bucks | ||
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maybe 50 | maybe 50 | ||
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bubbles burst a stomach of fourse ---(amy joe you little bitch) | bubbles burst a stomach of fourse ---(amy joe you little bitch) | ||
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she is offering you | she is offering you | ||
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carved tattoos of an empty wallet | carved tattoos of an empty wallet | ||
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a man picks water for a shirt | a man picks water for a shirt | ||
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destroys mimesis by wit | destroys mimesis by wit | ||
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of a mouth probing innards | of a mouth probing innards | ||
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I read lips, too | I read lips, too | ||
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must listen I still have a sense | must listen I still have a sense | ||
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of smell of wishbones turkeywings | of smell of wishbones turkeywings | ||
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in shaping looks | in shaping looks | ||
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where is the knife | where is the knife | ||
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where is the slutwhore gentry | where is the slutwhore gentry | ||
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I am ablazin | I am ablazin | ||
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copious | copious | ||
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bad something you know me | bad something you know me | ||
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crap out a person stilted | crap out a person stilted | ||
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trees of a sky a dumb groping | trees of a sky a dumb groping | ||
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I want it to state fair ladies | I want it to state fair ladies | ||
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have attention | have attention | ||
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gentle man the ball man | gentle man the ball man | ||
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raise 500 fingers to air | raise 500 fingers to air | ||
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one young man runs a wallow in a mush pot | one young man runs a wallow in a mush pot | ||
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all day | all day | ||
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ok all right | ok all right | ||
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two poeple go ahead for pleasure | two poeple go ahead for pleasure | ||
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disabled bodies | disabled bodies | ||
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a category | a category | ||
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flirting reckless nymph chats | flirting reckless nymph chats | ||
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you are responsible | you are responsible | ||
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a pizza in winter | a pizza in winter | ||
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sign your name in the able | sign your name in the able | ||
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bodies category | bodies category | ||
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any crumbling shacks slope | any crumbling shacks slope | ||
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with anger with fury beer | with anger with fury beer | ||
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and more | and more | ||
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fury sign up line up sigh up | fury sign up line up sigh up | ||
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die | die | ||
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cast | cast | ||
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in out of her | in out of her | ||
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uterus plums her uterus boston | uterus plums her uterus boston | ||
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dumping tea on | dumping tea on | ||
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the british what | the british what | ||
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just the british | just the british | ||
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are you ready no. 1 | are you ready no. 1 | ||
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duck for a buck | duck for a buck | ||
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Co.! | Co.! | ||
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heavy seeds are weighting the grown | heavy seeds are weighting the grown | ||
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have attention getup | have attention getup | ||
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meat hooks claw flesh | meat hooks claw flesh | ||
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the recipient of science | the recipient of science | ||
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and industry claims a mottled | and industry claims a mottled | ||
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strapped shitted calls to him | strapped shitted calls to him | ||
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no that's a moray of movement | no that's a moray of movement | ||
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read the weeds of handicap navigation | read the weeds of handicap navigation | ||
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city blocks a jewelery cleaner | city blocks a jewelery cleaner | ||
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64 is my number of better go | 64 is my number of better go | ||
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slumming in motion is second | slumming in motion is second | ||
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that is the base of choice | that is the base of choice | ||
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ok more later, have to go work, tim | ok more later, have to go work, tim | ||
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that's it thank alot of toes | that's it thank alot of toes | ||
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friendly dogs for a buck | friendly dogs for a buck | ||
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holder no.7 spits out urine | holder no.7 spits out urine | ||
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I am standing in | I am standing in | ||
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winter clothes clad my soul | winter clothes clad my soul | ||
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I'd like a check of reason | I'd like a check of reason | ||
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leave-the-table-phase | leave-the-table-phase | ||
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with spoons flinging towards | with spoons flinging towards | ||
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the hungry | the hungry | ||
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brocoli-food squids that swim | brocoli-food squids that swim | ||
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radished burn in winter | radished burn in winter | ||
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is better | is better | ||
taken care of | taken care of | ||
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I am informed | I am informed | ||
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signed up | signed up | ||
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the first people under the chair | the first people under the chair | ||
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hold out arms | hold out arms | ||
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in rage | in rage | ||
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squash my enemies by speaking out | squash my enemies by speaking out | ||
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hyperbole waiting for what are you | hyperbole waiting for what are you | ||
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now not nervous | now not nervous | ||
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a fig | a fig | ||
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a log | a log | ||
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and a watermelon | and a watermelon | ||
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sink by wagers into the the thrust | sink by wagers into the the thrust | ||
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pulse of an artery rapture | pulse of an artery rapture | ||
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burst into jigsaws | burst into jigsaws | ||
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into a vacuum | into a vacuum | ||
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clean | clean | ||
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outside of her glasses | outside of her glasses | ||
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she spies daylight | she spies daylight | ||
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that rich wonder | that rich wonder | ||
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pondering drops all thought | pondering drops all thought | ||
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an animal in shorts | an animal in shorts | ||
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prattles a feezy to show | prattles a feezy to show | ||
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everybody | everybody | ||
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pay attention | pay attention | ||
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do not worry about falling | do not worry about falling | ||
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go up over | go up over | ||
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take a sleight left | take a sleight left | ||
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remove your hand | remove your hand | ||
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from my face | from my face | ||
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priest | priest | ||
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and | and | ||
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insink your belly | insink your belly | ||
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holy water you can find in stores | holy water you can find in stores | ||
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buy her some food | buy her some food | ||
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by a woman | by a woman | ||
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choose | choose | ||
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vieny crumbles brown and heave | vieny crumbles brown and heave | ||
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women nigger | women nigger | ||
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women mother inculpates | women mother inculpates | ||
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sinks and hams cooked by | sinks and hams cooked by | ||
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mexican sweat | mexican sweat | ||
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makin a move | makin a move | ||
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hang in the bar a figure 8 | hang in the bar a figure 8 | ||
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a poke | a poke | ||
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he's doing good | he's doing good | ||
c'mon | c'mon | ||
Let me get a pitcher | Let me get a pitcher | ||
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and we will begin one | and we will begin one | ||
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of fur fire | of fur fire | ||
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hats a beginner | hats a beginner | ||
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in florida joshua is bad | in florida joshua is bad | ||
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but elijah is buddy all in there | but elijah is buddy all in there | ||
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man | man | ||
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who is a sugarbear | who is a sugarbear | ||
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see past the hand give kids a hand | see past the hand give kids a hand | ||
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ablebodied tan first up none other | ablebodied tan first up none other | ||
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a head shaven | a head shaven | ||
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actually they do | actually they do | ||
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you know the rules seen the course retire | you know the rules seen the course retire | ||
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the no no | the no no | ||
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no no no | no no no | ||
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ok a race is slaughter | ok a race is slaughter | ||
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a last minute | a last minute | ||
i left a quarter on the toilet | i left a quarter on the toilet | ||
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i roped trouble | i roped trouble | ||
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(boy we will catch you ok) | (boy we will catch you ok) | ||
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ok I guess so ready set go | ok I guess so ready set go | ||
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wheelies out of the gate rattling | wheelies out of the gate rattling | ||
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get behind here in fact | get behind here in fact | ||
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we're whipping the can-do-it-problem | we're whipping the can-do-it-problem | ||
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WHOOOO! | WHOOOO! | ||
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1.4 secs. | 1.4 secs. | ||
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more pukin' hey | more pukin' hey | ||
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that's a leaving hell of handing it out | that's a leaving hell of handing it out | ||
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who is next? | who is next? | ||
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squirm a beer ear who is up? | squirm a beer ear who is up? | ||
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dean of helmets | dean of helmets | ||
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dicks not here many know a 2.00$ meal ticket | dicks not here many know a 2.00$ meal ticket | ||
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ok as many you | ok as many you | ||
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may have seen | may have seen | ||
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stuntmen | stuntmen | ||
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1st time lady races | 1st time lady races | ||
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without a word lopped | without a word lopped | ||
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in a head ready to go | in a head ready to go | ||
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ok | ok | ||
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1-2-3-go | 1-2-3-go | ||
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crystal's sculpture of glass | crystal's sculpture of glass | ||
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need is going for it | need is going for it | ||
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checking her hair is picking flies | checking her hair is picking flies | ||
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the momma of matchboxes | the momma of matchboxes | ||
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has an 18-wheel gurney | has an 18-wheel gurney | ||
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this is why | this is why | ||
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he lost his soul in the river | he lost his soul in the river | ||
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arms chump stomach | arms chump stomach | ||
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wretchedness of vomit | wretchedness of vomit | ||
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ok a guy is next he | ok a guy is next he | ||
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was a big man in town | was a big man in town | ||
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until tearing women onetwothree | until tearing women onetwothree | ||
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off his flung sweat a head | off his flung sweat a head | ||
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of excruciating | of excruciating | ||
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what she will | what she will | ||
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that makes my bladder | that makes my bladder | ||
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chariots bust up | chariots bust up | ||
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broken houses already to pour cement | broken houses already to pour cement | ||
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in holes | in holes | ||
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by the water of a skewed | by the water of a skewed | ||
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enviro-ment attempt to beat | enviro-ment attempt to beat | ||
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a sling of arrows pierce the door | a sling of arrows pierce the door | ||
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hands slop up wetslick | hands slop up wetslick | ||
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vaginal game-so-of-it | vaginal game-so-of-it | ||
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look at it one wheel rollin' | look at it one wheel rollin' | ||
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ok he's ok | ok he's ok | ||
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he's grumbling out glory | he's grumbling out glory | ||
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computer plugs driven by amphetamine mice | computer plugs driven by amphetamine mice | ||
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drill out wholes | drill out wholes | ||
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in her body wrapped red wrappted with rapture | in her body wrapped red wrappted with rapture | ||
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so what | so what | ||
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her ankle murmurs passions unknown | her ankle murmurs passions unknown | ||
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to lost letters | to lost letters | ||
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and | and | ||
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filled | filled | ||
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tubes lunch on shells | tubes lunch on shells | ||
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second place | second place | ||
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arrives | arrives | ||
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wearing amped up power chords | wearing amped up power chords | ||
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attached to a groin | attached to a groin | ||
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delayed spring | delayed spring | ||
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a bed lost in space | a bed lost in space | ||
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that's a tree | that's a tree | ||
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and fuck | and fuck | ||
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and waits but wait! | and waits but wait! | ||
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three rocks dump your head | three rocks dump your head | ||
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wallow grovel street at night thinking vacuums | wallow grovel street at night thinking vacuums | ||
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spots and a blistered thight begs a broken hand | spots and a blistered thight begs a broken hand | ||
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we have cruel stuff | we have cruel stuff | ||
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we have no knowledge of what we do | we have no knowledge of what we do | ||
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no knowledge | no knowledge | ||
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like that space-meeting-smitty | like that space-meeting-smitty | ||
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he hangs like-understand-a-lot | he hangs like-understand-a-lot | ||
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a week of orlando | a week of orlando | ||
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streets bump into someone else | streets bump into someone else | ||
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for why make speaking for myself | for why make speaking for myself | ||
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living here mentioned or else | living here mentioned or else | ||
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bearded vitupe make closure | bearded vitupe make closure | ||
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hiding | hiding | ||
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paranoia is not sure | paranoia is not sure | ||
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just say your deal scared knuckle visits | just say your deal scared knuckle visits | ||
springfield is not actual | springfield is not actual | ||
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only after all is done | only after all is done | ||
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anamorphic victims a verbal foot | anamorphic victims a verbal foot | ||
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done now transmitted to a child's brain | done now transmitted to a child's brain | ||
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shooting bull is it good | shooting bull is it good | ||
+ | </pre> | ||
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+ | == Critical Appraisal == | ||
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+ | "Reads like a bunch of drunks wrote it --which as it turns out, was very much the case." [[Elbert Knowles]], editor, [[The Caged Alaskan]]. |
Current revision
Sporadically related to P-Boy and Tim Wilson through the medium of strong spirits, Bending Denim displays a playful mangling of words, or, as Steven Adkins described it, "the poetry of dangling legs."
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BENDING DENIM
my leg has sprung a leak "I need jiegermeister" yahoos yell mohawk and cripples navigate wood blocks kevin's cubist vision cites a beard bulging loin is shaven she is weeping floss a string from her eye is red and yields a bringing shot frued slipping on a tongue a baby's rattle a toy-blot manifesto serious pay for my half I got it I got it I got what kick start action wires on the street can you give me get away from his drink electrocuted my biggest one of my VCR's humming blown breezes laugh out the throat of warm water a nondescript ass scratch he's like five hundred bucks maybe 50 bubbles burst a stomach of fourse ---(amy joe you little bitch) she is offering you carved tattoos of an empty wallet a man picks water for a shirt destroys mimesis by wit of a mouth probing innards I read lips, too must listen I still have a sense of smell of wishbones turkeywings in shaping looks where is the knife where is the slutwhore gentry I am ablazin copious bad something you know me crap out a person stilted trees of a sky a dumb groping I want it to state fair ladies have attention gentle man the ball man raise 500 fingers to air one young man runs a wallow in a mush pot all day ok all right two poeple go ahead for pleasure disabled bodies a category flirting reckless nymph chats you are responsible a pizza in winter sign your name in the able bodies category any crumbling shacks slope with anger with fury beer and more fury sign up line up sigh up die cast in out of her uterus plums her uterus boston dumping tea on the british what just the british are you ready no. 1 duck for a buck Co.! heavy seeds are weighting the grown have attention getup meat hooks claw flesh the recipient of science and industry claims a mottled strapped shitted calls to him no that's a moray of movement read the weeds of handicap navigation city blocks a jewelery cleaner 64 is my number of better go slumming in motion is second that is the base of choice ok more later, have to go work, tim that's it thank alot of toes friendly dogs for a buck holder no.7 spits out urine I am standing in winter clothes clad my soul I'd like a check of reason leave-the-table-phase with spoons flinging towards the hungry brocoli-food squids that swim radished burn in winter is better taken care of I am informed signed up the first people under the chair hold out arms in rage squash my enemies by speaking out hyperbole waiting for what are you now not nervous a fig a log and a watermelon sink by wagers into the the thrust pulse of an artery rapture burst into jigsaws into a vacuum clean outside of her glasses she spies daylight that rich wonder pondering drops all thought an animal in shorts prattles a feezy to show everybody pay attention do not worry about falling go up over take a sleight left remove your hand from my face priest and insink your belly holy water you can find in stores buy her some food by a woman choose vieny crumbles brown and heave women nigger women mother inculpates sinks and hams cooked by mexican sweat makin a move hang in the bar a figure 8 a poke he's doing good c'mon Let me get a pitcher and we will begin one of fur fire hats a beginner in florida joshua is bad but elijah is buddy all in there man who is a sugarbear see past the hand give kids a hand ablebodied tan first up none other a head shaven actually they do you know the rules seen the course retire the no no no no no ok a race is slaughter a last minute i left a quarter on the toilet i roped trouble (boy we will catch you ok) ok I guess so ready set go wheelies out of the gate rattling get behind here in fact we're whipping the can-do-it-problem WHOOOO! 1.4 secs. more pukin' hey that's a leaving hell of handing it out who is next? squirm a beer ear who is up? dean of helmets dicks not here many know a 2.00$ meal ticket ok as many you may have seen stuntmen 1st time lady races without a word lopped in a head ready to go ok 1-2-3-go crystal's sculpture of glass need is going for it checking her hair is picking flies the momma of matchboxes has an 18-wheel gurney this is why he lost his soul in the river arms chump stomach wretchedness of vomit ok a guy is next he was a big man in town until tearing women onetwothree off his flung sweat a head of excruciating what she will that makes my bladder chariots bust up broken houses already to pour cement in holes by the water of a skewed enviro-ment attempt to beat a sling of arrows pierce the door hands slop up wetslick vaginal game-so-of-it look at it one wheel rollin' ok he's ok he's grumbling out glory computer plugs driven by amphetamine mice drill out wholes in her body wrapped red wrappted with rapture so what her ankle murmurs passions unknown to lost letters and filled tubes lunch on shells second place arrives wearing amped up power chords attached to a groin delayed spring a bed lost in space that's a tree and fuck and waits but wait! three rocks dump your head wallow grovel street at night thinking vacuums spots and a blistered thight begs a broken hand we have cruel stuff we have no knowledge of what we do no knowledge like that space-meeting-smitty he hangs like-understand-a-lot a week of orlando streets bump into someone else for why make speaking for myself living here mentioned or else bearded vitupe make closure hiding paranoia is not sure just say your deal scared knuckle visits springfield is not actual only after all is done anamorphic victims a verbal foot done now transmitted to a child's brain shooting bull is it good
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Critical Appraisal
"Reads like a bunch of drunks wrote it --which as it turns out, was very much the case." Elbert Knowles, editor, The Caged Alaskan.